Faia Merth

Wow! This was awesome! I love it because it's so different! I've never read something like this before. ^_^ Just wanted to say," Wow! Awesome!" Again xD Keep up the ...

“Jacqueline Birstmor! Wake up!” It was still that damn monotonous voice. I groaned and rolled over, but then instantly regretted it. A wave of nausea overtook me. In what seemed ...

[quote=] I know this is really short, but think of it as a small preview type thing. Please. :P ------------------------------------------------------------- The stale air of the room was as still as ...

-- Part 2 of the first chapter of Speculation: F58. -- “How did you drown?” I sighed and squeezed my eyes shut, not wanting to remember., but something forced my ...

Hello! :D I'm new at this, but I'll try my best. Octocoffee seems to have gotten most of the grammar errors. Sirens filled the air, echoing off skyscrapers and ringing ...

Sunlight streamed through the curtains like golden beams. Dirrella’s eyes fluttered open while the light slowly trickled across her face, Just start a new sentence here with a sigh she ...

People say when you’re about to die, your life flashes before your eyes. In my case, that’s far from true. All I could see were the small bubbles of air ...

I like this piece. I love when people write about the planets pollution.

Okay, here's the second little bit. I've tried to fix all the past and present tenses, which I am having great difficulty with for some reason. I've never had that ...

My second time trying my hand at writing. It's my very first draft since this idea just hit me last night, and I had a frenzy of getting all my ...

Congrads Evi :)

This sounds an awful lot like the Hunger Games. I only skimmed, but from what I read, you are a really good writer. I would edit and make suggestions, but ...

Heyy, this needs some reviewing and creative criticism! Please and thank-you :D Cool water lapsed against her feet uncomfortably, making Faia shiver. The moon hung in the sky like a ...